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Read the poems in the post below, and then vote for your top 2 favourite entries!
Entry 1 3 (6.3%)
Entry 2 5 (10.4%)
Entry 3 1 (2.1%)
Entry 4 7 (14.6%)
Entry 5 3 (6.3%)
Entry 6 3 (6.3%)
Entry 7 3 (6.3%)
Entry 8 23 (47.9%)
Total Votes: 48
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Topic Started: Sep 30 2009, 07:34 PM (947 Views)
Will
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Thanks to all of the users who submitted a poem for the Fall Poetry Contest. Please take a moment and read over the amazing submissions below. Vote for your favourite entry by October 7th, and help someone win our prize: Free ad removal! Root for a specific poem, offer constructive critique, or just post your thoughts here in this topic.

Good luck to those who submitted an entry!

Entry 1
 
Fall is here again
leaves escape their spent branches
as they turn to red

Cold winds from the east
push leaves and hide the sun
Fall is here again

Submitted by Lindsey
Entry 2
 
I feel sorrow for having another summer gone
but I feel happy for the things I have done
swimming, sunbathing, having a blast
but this summer went by, it went by really fast

But the fall is now here
with all its beauty we all hold dear
the wind, the rain, the colors and all
that's what we call, yes we call it Fall

Embrace this moment of year
Because it's lovely
and it makes you forget, forget all your fear

Submitted by Nasir T
Entry 3
 
God I hate fall.

Da dump, da dump, da dumm.

Summer is the best, you fall guys stink.

Da dump, da dump, da dumm.

Mmm, punkin' pie.

Submitted by mcteeth
Entry 4
 
Children play in piles of colorful leaves top to bottom.
It's finally that time of year, the beginning of autumn.
Time to grab costumes, Halloween is here.
Ring the doorbell, and say trick or treat, you get candy from this cheer.

November arrives, it's starting to get cold.
Your unfinished candy starts to mold.
The apple pie's smell goes outside from a breeze,
Thanksgiving is here, eat with or without ease.

But before you know it, the Holidays come to town.
And you wake goodbye to fall, you sigh with a frown.
No need to fret, no need to fear.
For of course autumn will be here next year.

Submitted by .Devin
Entry 5
 
"See you in the fall," you said.
I nodded disappointed
And then
Sat under shade,
Through too hot days,
Painting skin white
With cheap sun lotion,
Clinging to the notion
That you would return.

Leaves relinquished green
Licked at yellow,
Dipped into orange,
And bared their brown.
Pale tan regained
Its purple-grey
And you never returned.

Submitted by trickymac
Entry 6
 
I remember waiting,
Anticipating
The coming days before
And of previous summer's lore

Every year I knew
That the sky's bright blue
Would soon be home to wind
A signal of when fall begins

Birds flying in the sky
And Christmas shopping by
The end of October
Thanksgiving Hangovers

Ah, yes, the days ahead
And the great times they embed
I know not what awaits me now
But fun and fall, oh boy, oh wow.

Submitted by Karabox
Entry 7
 
The season of joy is coming to an end.
A now open sore in which even god cannot mend.
As good times and memories come to a halt,
we all wish that the ending could be corrected, a fixed fault.

The season of life has ended.
Life has fallen, like the city of Troy could not be defended.
The light of our season that once was, has finally dimmed.
The knowledge of love and life. Not even skimmed.

I wish thee farewell, my lovely heated weather.
The time of shorts and t-shirts is done.
While it lasted, however, it was fine.
I'll be right back - gotta go put on a sweater.

Submitted by dZ
Entry 8
 
Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall
Humpty Dumpty had a great fall
His spring and summer pretty much sucked, though.

Submitted by HelenaZF
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ElementalAlchemist
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ERROR: This title does not exist.
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I was going for 4 and 6 until I read 8. XD Then I had to pick one.

3... holy rusted metal, Batman!?!
EDIT: Oh, yes, the word censor. However, this time the word censor actually fits my thoughts perfectly. OK, well, it kinda doesn't, but since they added a question mark to it it's closer than it could be.
Edited by ElementalAlchemist, Sep 30 2009, 08:20 PM.
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HelenaZF
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OMG! I'm getting votes...I'm a poet!

Drat...I missed the part about voting for 2 favorites....
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Haha. Good luck guys. =p
Edited by dZ, Oct 1 2009, 12:13 AM.
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I vote for #2 and #8. I'm not very familiar with Humpty Dumpty however I remember him from Carroll's book: Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found There. And also I have an egg as my avatar, Dizzy, so why not ;). However I like #2 more.
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Nemomon
Oct 1 2009, 06:01 AM
I'm not very familiar with Humpty Dumpty however I remember him from Carroll's book: Through the Looking-Glass, and What Alice Found There.
I award you cool points.

Looking-Glass > Wonderland. :ph34r:

And who the heck voted for me? Somebody needs to change their vote to someone who matters. -_-
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Lindsey, your second haiku is actually quite good. I'm not surprised someone voted for it.

Love your eggy avatar, Nemomon. So prophetic. :r
Edited by HelenaZF, Oct 1 2009, 10:49 PM.
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Lindsey
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<3

Well I don't have a forum, do I? I more or less entered so Will wouldn't feel bad when nobody entered. :P
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Dam I voted for 1. Ok it was the shortest 1 but cheeky and thats why 8 has my vote
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Nemomon
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Lindsey, IF/ZB is Your forum, maybe finally we will see this board without advertisements, for a month but better that than nothing (jk). You might share Your prize with user, who will be at second place.

And thanks Helena for a nice words about my avatar :) Somehow it really was a prophecy, or just visual haiku, for what users here should vote ;)
Lindsey
Oct 1 2009, 11:31 PM
Well I don't have a forum, do I? I more or less entered so Will wouldn't feel bad when nobody entered. :P
If this means, You are gonna to enter Stephen's Halloween contest as well? :r
Edited by Nemomon, Oct 2 2009, 03:46 AM.
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Lindsey
Oct 1 2009, 11:31 PM
Well I don't have a forum, do I? I more or less entered so Will wouldn't feel bad when nobody entered. :P
Haha! And I entered mainly to see if I could get Will to laugh out loud. :D
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Lindsey
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Nemomon
Oct 2 2009, 03:45 AM
Lindsey
Oct 1 2009, 11:31 PM
Well I don't have a forum, do I? I more or less entered so Will wouldn't feel bad when nobody entered. :P
If this means, You are gonna to enter Stephen's Halloween contest as well? :r
Maybe. :shifty:
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Can't believe entry 8 has so many votes. O_o Definitely is a favorite in my book because I despise poems that are long and take a few reads to fully comprehend.
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Will
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Looks like it will end up winning for sure, lol. :)
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Will
Oct 3 2009, 02:58 PM
Looks like it will end up winning for sure, lol. :)
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Haha! And I entered mainly to see if I could get Will to laugh out loud. :D


Score! :D
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